Jun 12, 2013

Our World is Hell

Our world is not finished yet,
It is merely a furnace that burns as hot as Hell,
And one day it may forge a place where we can call home,
A place where we feel welcome.



The fire of our world burns and destroys all.
Everything is reduced to equilibrium,
When it should be raised to a new state of balance.



The scraps at the bottom of the pile are thrown in with the beautiful.
They burn together and become one.
That is where we are now. Burning together.



One day the fires will stop
And we will be molded into something beautiful,
Something great, something worth taking a second look at.

4 mga kritiko:

blindpen18 said...

dmi kong inisip sa maiksing akda na 'to ah. isa kasi ako sa mga taong laging iniisip na impyerno itong mundo, kulang pa ang pagpapaliwanag natin, kahit pa mga sinabi ni Dan Brown e hnd sapat. isa lng ang sigurado, mayroong resultang hindi pa ganap, resultang iba-iba sa sarili nating mga pananaw.

Orange Pulps ♥ said...

uhuh. this world is a hell, but this hell still has "heavens" to offer.

Vintot said...

wag masyadong namnamin tong akda ko, perspektibo ko lamang ang mga ito, gusto ko lang sipatin sa ibang anggulo ang mga bagay bagay.


salamat sa pagbisita. :D

Munir said...

I read the English part. It is a new approach. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

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