May 30, 2011

Flood of Fate

Time just seems to deteriorate
Like the bliss within my core
Of tranquility and contentment
Each day after each damn day
As clouds grow heavy and gray
Each drop impales the ground
Like a devastating missile
Drop by drop, puddle by puddle
Consuming the eternal ground
Like a global flood

Not one desperate dove will perch
Upon my branch of death
For it shall drown in the flood
As I cannot protect it from harm
But, I, soon to die, would like company
For I shall drown in my fate
It is ironic, this malicious torture
For I consume what is soon to consume
My ages of forged life
Leaf by leaf, branch by branch
Bark by bark, ring by ring
Like a point-blank bullet 
Fired without temptation
Killing another victim

Time just seems to deteriorate
Like the bliss within my core
Of tranquility and contentment
Each day after each damn day
As clouds grow heavy and gray
Each drop impales the ground
Like a devastating missile
Drop by drop, puddle by puddle
Consuming the eternal ground
Like a global flood

11 mga kritiko:

bloggingpuyat said...

nice..malalim ;)

Vin said...

@Puyat yup may pag ka malalim nga salamat sa pag bisita bro :)

tim said...

Just the words draws emotion the is un-graspable..

This is just awesome!

_a_n_o_n_y_m_o_u_s_ said...

hanu daw?
epistaxis to..
hehehehe..peace..^_^

Leah said...

Owemgee... hindi ko magrasp ang meaning ng poem. ang SLOW ko!! hehehe.. Wait.. Is this a poem of a dying man? Para kasing.. he's lost all hope. Like.. he has given up on life..

Ah ewan.. hahaha.. Slowmoving ngayon ang aking brain cells.. :P

Dumaan!!!

Akoni said...

malalim english pa...lalo ako hindi nakahinga..haha...pero ayos, masarap basahin...hehe

Whang said...

binasa ko...
binasa ko ulit...
bumaha ng dugo sa kwarto... lol

Vin said...

hehe sorry kung malalim metaphoric poem kasi ito.salamat sa suhestyon ninyo mga bro.

galing ni miss leah natumpok po life and death nga po :)

ito po yung metaphoric meaning ng poem.


1) The tree is the "character" of
the poem, the person.
2) The flood, in the beginning, is
the person crying because he
knows he is going to die by his
own hands.
3) The dove is his ability to
remain alive; of course you can
tell he won't live 'cause the dove
will not be by his side anymore.
4) The flood, in the end, is his
blood; he died by his own hands.
5) It is ironic 'cause he is a
murderer.

Salamat sa pag bisita keep reading :)

Akoni said...

Okay ngayon nagets ko na...hirap minsan magets mga poem..hehe..lalo na metaphoric na yan..hehe

Anonymous said...

ang lalim ng pinag-huhugutan mo ah?
ikaw nga ba ito Arvin?

Vin said...

@akoni oo nga eh yung iba talaga ang hirap intindihin.


@anonymous da hu? kahibangan ko lang yan :D

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